Saturday, October 13, 2012

BlogFEST 2012 - Shadowland



 I stand behind him,
but he doesn't see me.
He might hear something,
but he thinks it's the wind.

 I live in the Shadowland,
silently waiting to escape.
Watching him from inside
hoping to be with him outside.

He's knows I am here somewhere
and has searched for me for years.
He just needs to find the key
to unlock the Shadowland.

I need to reach him desperately,
 must send him more clues.
But only thru his dreams
because that is when he is closest.

For now I live unseen,
my voice remains unheard.
Locked oh so far away 
deep within the Shadowland.

But not for long...



Wishing you moments to escape from the shadows,
 Susan's Blog Signature

This blog was written as a part of BlogFest 2012. Check out Leigh's post - she's the host today. Please click on the picture below for more information!




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11 comments :

  1. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing. Inside the outside, what a funny place to be....

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  2. Awesome Susan!!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  3. Susan, this is really disturbing and creepy! And that picture sends chills down my spine. Yikes! I probably won't sleep tonight, which you should consider a mark of success. :-)

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    1. Yes, Daphne! I went for the macabre. Not usually my normal fair...so I had to try. The picture is pretty cool...I just happened to stumble upon that on the site I use to get some of my pictures (www.photoxpress.com)for my other writing. Believe it or not, but I was inspired by a Disney Channel movie for this one!

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  4. nice shadow post. we all have our shadows we need to escape!

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  5. WOW...not your usual, but I liked it, a lot!!

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    1. You're right! It's not my usual...but sometimes you just have to do something different.

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  6. Wow, nice poem Susan. I like the picture it painted. You penned these lines well especially: "Watching him from inside/ hoping to be with him outside."

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  7. Oh, how I loved this...gave me chills. Once again, you amaze me!

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